Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be careful with verb tenses and subject-verb agreement, and make your answer more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence in the past tense, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating words and aim for correct grammar (e.g., 'had' not 'do have', 'gave' not 'giving').

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me so I could learn to ride, and my older siblings gave me patient guidance, holding the seat and running alongside me until I felt confident. As a result, I learned quickly and enjoyed cycling around the neighborhood.

提案: Use correct noun forms and clearer linking words, and give a specific reason or example. Begin with a direct opinion, then support it with a clear, concise reason and one specific example. Fix grammar (e.g., 'bikes are', 'students', 'easier') and avoid redundancy ('ride riding').

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many students ride bicycles to school because they are cheaper to run and easier to park than cars or motorcycles, so cycling is a convenient choice for short trips.

× Yes, I do have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question asks about the past ('when you were a child'), so use past tense 'had' not present 'do have'. Change maintains time consistency. Grammar Problem Type ID: 6

× When I was a child my parents bought it for me so that I can practice riding the bike.

✓ When I was a child my parents bought it for me so that I could practice riding the bike.

The action is in the past, so the modal 'can' should be the past form 'could' to match past time reference. Use 'could' for ability in the past. Grammar Problem Type ID: 4

× I didn't practice it alone, my siblings always giving me a great guiding and they always help me riding the bike and practice because practice make perfect in life.

✓ I didn't practice alone; my siblings always gave me great guidance and they always helped me ride the bike and practice, because practice makes perfect.

Multiple issues corrected but aligned with allowed types: 'giving' used incorrectly as a continuous form—should be past 'gave' to match past narrative (Verb + -ing form issue ID 8). 'guiding' is a noun misuse; replaced with 'guidance'. 'help me riding' is incorrect; use 'helped me ride' (verb base after 'help'). 'practice make' needs subject-verb agreement: 'practice makes'. Overall maintain past tense for consistency. Suggestions: keep verbs in past when describing past events, use 'help + base verb', and use correct noun 'guidance'. Grammar Problem Type ID: 8

× Yes, I do think bike is quite popular in my country because some of the student in my school they always ride riding bike to go to school instead of riding motorcycle and car because it is a lot more easier.

✓ Yes, I do think bikes are quite popular in my country because some of the students in my school always ride bikes to go to school instead of riding motorcycles or cars, because it is much easier.

Several plurality and article issues: 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' to match general statement (Singular and plural issue ID 1). 'student' should be 'students'. 'ride riding bike' is redundant; use 'ride bikes'. 'motorcycle and car' should be plural 'motorcycles or cars'. 'a lot more easier' is incorrect comparative; use 'much easier'. Also corrected 'they' redundancy and removed extra words for clarity. Grammar Problem Type ID: 1