Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap daha doğrudan ve düzenli olmalı. İlk önce soruya kısa bir ana cümleyle yanıt verin (ör. Evet veya Hayır), ardından gereklilik halinde bir veya iki destekleyici cümle ekleyin. Gereksiz tekrarlar ve dolgu sözcükleri (umm, umm past) azaltılmalı. Ayrıca kelime hataları ve sözdizimi düzeltilmeli (ör. "bags" yerine "bikes", "white and pink bicycle" şeklinde doğru sıralama). Bağlaçlar (for example, because, when) kullanarak cümleler arasındaki akışı iyileştirin. Maksimum 5 cümleyi geçmeyin.

例: Yes, I did. When I was a child I owned a small white-and-pink bicycle, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood every weekend. Because many streets were quiet in the evenings, I felt safe cycling with my friends. Overall, biking was a very popular activity among children then.

× I think bags are not popular in my country now but umm past in past umm bikes are very popular in my country.

✓ I think bikes are not very popular in my country now, but in the past bikes were very popular.

Original sentence has wrong word 'bags' instead of 'bikes' (likely a slip) and awkward phrasing 'past in past'. Also tense consistency: contrasting present situation with past requires present simple for now ('are') and past simple for the past ('were'). Suggestion: replace 'bags' with 'bikes', remove filler words, use a clear contrast 'now' and 'in the past'. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× When I was a child umm I had a umm white and pink and bicycle.

✓ When I was a child, I had a white and pink bicycle.

The original contains extra 'and' and unnecessary fillers 'umm', and places adjectives incorrectly with extra conjunction. Use adjective order 'white and pink' followed by the noun 'bicycle' without an extra 'and'. Include a comma after the introductory clause. This fixes sentence structure and article placement. Grammar problem type ID: 26