Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ слишком короткий и не раскрывает тему. Дайте тематическое предложение, затем добавьте детали (например, когда вы получили велосипед, как часто на нём ездили, с кем катались, запомнившиеся моменты). Используйте связки для плавности (for example, when, because, so). Постарайтесь уложиться в максимум 5 предложений.

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven and rode it almost every day after school. For example, I often cycled to the park with my friends and we would race each other. Riding a bike helped me feel independent and improved my confidence.

提案: Ответ слишком общий и не аргументирован. Дайте прямой ответ, затем добавьте конкретные причины и примеры (например, статистика, урбанистические особенности, популярные мероприятия). Используйте связующие слова (because, also, for instance) и не более 5 предложений.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For instance, there are dedicated cycling lanes in many cities and regular community cycling events. Also, bikes are an affordable and eco-friendly option, so more people choose them for daily commuting.

× Yes, I think.

✓ Yes, I think so.

The student response is incomplete for the question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?'. This is a sentence structure issue (type 26). Native-like responses to yes/no questions usually include 'so' or a brief expansion (e.g., 'Yes, I think so' or 'Yes, I do') to make the meaning clear. Suggestion: add 'so' after 'think' or provide a short clause ('I think they are') to complete the idea and match the present-tense question.