Bike— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
受験者
Yes, I had the bike when I was a child and I rode it with my brother.
試験官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
受験者
Yes, it's popular. Almost all of the people here use it to do their daily exercise, and it's a fun way to keep your body moving.
評価
総合
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
スコア: 70.0提案: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using a linking phrase. Avoid unnecessary articles and repetition (e.g., say “a bike” not “the bike”).
例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it with my brother around our neighborhood every weekend, which helped me gain confidence and balance quickly.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
スコア: 75.0提案: Make the response more precise and natural by using plural agreement and a linking word to connect ideas. Provide a specific example or reason to support your opinion and avoid absolute statements like “almost all.”
例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people ride them in the mornings for exercise and to commute short distances because it’s cheap and good for health.
文法
× Yes, I had the bike when I was a child and I rode it with my brother.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I rode it with my brother.
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