Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve tense accuracy, expand to a full short response, and add a specific detail. Begin with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one or two supporting details using a linking word. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

例: Yes, I did. When I was about eight, my parents bought me a small red bike with training wheels, and I rode it every weekend in the park. It helped me become more independent and confident.

提案: Answer as a complete sentence, give a clear opinion and support it with a specific reason or example using a linking word. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' and keep the response concise.

例: Yes, bikes are still quite popular in Cambodia because many people use them for short trips and commuting; for example, markets and city streets are full of motorbikes and bicycles used daily.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked a past-tense question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' so the answer must use past tense. Using 'have' (present) is tense mismatch. Use 'did' as the past-tense auxiliary for short answers to 'Did' questions. Suggestion: reply with 'Yes, I did.' or 'Yes, I had a bike.' to match past tense.

× Popular in Cambodia.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in Cambodia.

The student response is a fragment lacking a subject and a conjugated verb, making it ungrammatical. The examiner asked 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' which requires a full clause. Correct structure includes subject 'bikes' and verb 'are' and optionally an introductory 'Yes,'. Suggestion: respond with 'Yes, bikes are popular in Cambodia.' or 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in Cambodia.' to provide a complete sentence.