Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Pronunciation and a small lexical error affected clarity. Also the answer is very short and could be expanded with one or two supporting details using linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence correcting the word "bike", then give reasons or a brief example. Keep it natural and no more than 3–4 sentences.

例: I didn’t have a bike when I was a child, mainly because my family couldn’t afford one at the time. However, I used to borrow my neighbour’s bike every weekend, which helped me learn to ride. As a result, I became confident cycling by the time I was ten.

提案: The answer is direct but too short and lacks supporting detail. Expand with a topic sentence plus one or two specific reasons or examples, using a linking word (e.g., "because", "for example", "so"). That will make your response more coherent and informative while still concise.

例: Yes, definitely — bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, in cities there are dedicated bike lanes and rental schemes, so cycling is both convenient and affordable.

× I didn't have a bake when I was a child.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The student wrote 'bake' which is a misspelling of 'bike'; this is a lexical error rather than a grammar rule from the provided list. However, it affects meaning and number form too because 'bike' is a countable noun. Replace the incorrect word 'bake' with the correct singular noun 'bike' to match the intended object. Suggestion: pay attention to spelling of vocabulary, and proofread for similar-looking words before answering.