Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 在回答中注意时态一致、句子完整，并减少填充词（如 uh）。开头直接回答问题，随后用一两句补充具体细节（什么时候学会、在哪里骑、和谁一起）。使用连接词使表达更连贯。例如可以用具体时间点和短语来丰富内容。

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was eight and learned to ride it in the park near my home. I practiced every afternoon with my father for several months, and it became my favorite way to travel short distances.

提案: 回答时要语法正确并避免重复。先给出明确观点，然后用一到两句给出具体原因和例子。注意词汇选择（例如 public transport, buses, cars, few people）并使用连接词如 because, although, however 来组织句子。

例: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because most people prefer public transport or cars. For example, many cities have convenient bus and subway systems, so only a small number of people choose to cycle for their daily commute.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

原句使用現在時態“have”與面試官問的過去情境（“Did you have... when you were a child?”）不一致。應使用過去式“had”。建議：注意句子時間參照，遇到過去時間點（when I was a child）時把動詞改為過去式。

× When I was child I learned how to, uh, how to bicycle a long time.

✓ When I was a child, I learned how to ride a bicycle a long time ago.

原句缺少冠詞“a”於“child”（單數可數名詞需冠詞），且短語“how to bicycle”不自然，應使用固定搭配“ride a bicycle”，並且時間表達順序不當，應為“a long time ago”。建議：可數單數名詞要加冠詞，使用慣用搭配“ride a bicycle”，將時間狀語放在句末並使用正確表達。

× I don't I don't think so.

✓ I don't think so.

原句重複“I don't”，屬於冗餘而非時態，但需刪去重複部分以使句子正確流暢。建議：注意避免口語重複或口吃型片語，在正式回答中刪除多餘詞。

× More people they will like use transportation or like bus and anti auto and a few people they will use bicycle.

✓ More people prefer to use public transport like buses and cars, and only a few people use bicycles.

原句中重複主語（“More people they”與後面“a few people they”），英語中不需要在已表示主語後再用代詞重複；此外語序與動詞搭配不自然（“will like use”應為“prefer to use”或“use”），“anti auto”不是正確表達，應改為“cars”或“automobiles”。時態方面此處描述習慣性事實用一般現在時。建議：不要重複主語，使用正確動詞搭配（prefer to do / use），用正確名詞表示交通工具，並用一般現在時描述常態。