Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add one concise supporting detail. Use correct past tense and simpler, accurate vocabulary. For example, say you didn’t have a bike, explain what you had instead, and why. Keep it to 1–3 sentences and use linking words like “instead” or “because.”

例: No, I didn’t have a proper bike when I was a child. Instead, my parents gave me a small balance bike, so I only learned to ride a real bicycle later when I was older.

提案: Your response contradicts itself and has many grammar and clarity issues. First, answer directly (Yes or No) and then explain briefly with a clear reason. Use linking words such as “because” or “however.” Be specific about who prefers cars and why (e.g. comfort, speed, status). Avoid repetition and incorrect plural forms.

例: Not really — I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars for comfort and speed. As a result, cycling is less common in cities, especially for commuting.

× No, I have not bike when I was child because my parents gave me a small bike cycle from my childhood.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child because my parents did not give me one during my childhood.

Errors: 'have not bike' is ungrammatical — the correct negative past form is 'did not have' (past tense, auxiliary did). 'when I was child' lacks the article 'a' and should be 'when I was a child'. 'my parents gave me a small bike cycle from my childhood' is awkward and contradictory with the negative; likely intended meaning is parents did not give a bike during childhood. Suggestion: use past simple for past facts (did not have), include articles ('a child', 'a bike' or 'one'), and ensure consistency in meaning. Example improved phrase: 'I did not have a bike when I was a child because my parents did not give me one.'

× No, I think bikes are popular in our country because peoples are prefer more cars because they are very comfortable and they are they are lot of waste of time.

✓ No, I think bikes are not very popular in our country because people prefer cars since they are more comfortable and save a lot of time.

Multiple errors: 'peoples' is incorrect plural — use 'people' (uncountable plural). 'are prefer' combines auxiliary 'are' with base verb 'prefer' incorrectly; correct is simple present 'prefer' for habitual actions (subject-verb agreement). 'they are they are lot of waste of time' is ungrammatical and contradictory; intended meaning is cars save time. Use 'more comfortable' (comparative) and 'save a lot of time' or 'are less time-consuming'. Suggestion: use 'people prefer cars' and logical connectors ('since' or 'because') and correct comparative/adverb forms ('more comfortable', 'save time').