Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Réponse correcte mais trop courte et répétitive. Donnez une phrase thématique claire puis ajoutez un ou deux détails concrets (par exemple : quel âge vous aviez, à quoi ressemblait le vélo, qui vous a appris à en faire) en utilisant des mots de liaison simples pour améliorer la fluidité.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was seven and it was a small red bicycle with training wheels. My father taught me to ride in the park, and I remember practicing there every weekend.

提案: La réponse est trop brève, contient une répétition et manque de détails spécifiques. Répondez d'abord directement, puis développez avec raisons précises et un lien logique (par exemple : culture locale, infrastructure, usages quotidiens) et évitez les répétitions.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For instance, cities have many bike lanes and people often cycle to work or the market, especially during spring and summer.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because many people use it use it.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because many people use them.

The error is subject-verb/ pronoun agreement: 'bikes' is plural, so the pronoun referring to it must be the plural 'them' instead of the singular 'it'. Use 'use them' to match the plural noun. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents; replace 'it' with 'them' when referring to plural nouns.