Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response grammatically correct, more concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb tenses (use past simple), avoid repetition, and limit to 3–4 sentences.

例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I learned to ride it in the park with my parents, although I fell off several times at the beginning. Because they encouraged me, I eventually became confident and can still ride well today.

提案: Give a clear direct answer, then support it with specific examples and linking words. Use plural/singular consistently (bicycles are), avoid hesitations and repetition, and keep it to 2–3 concise sentences. Mention reasons or contexts (school commuting, exercise) if possible.

例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. For example, many students ride bicycles to school, and I often see commuters and exercise groups cycling in the mornings. This is partly because cycling is cheap and convenient for short trips.

× Umm I do had a bicycle when I was a child and I practiced riding it with my parents in the park and I it was a hard time because I get so many injured.

✓ Umm I had a bicycle when I was a child and I practiced riding it with my parents in the park and it was a hard time because I got so many injuries.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses: 'do had' is incorrect; use simple past 'had'. 'Get' should be past 'got' to match the past timeframe. 'So many injured' is incorrect noun usage; use 'so many injuries' or 'was so injured'. Keep verbs consistent in past tense for events that happened in childhood. Suggestion: Use simple past for completed actions (had, practiced, got) and use correct noun forms (injuries).

× But because of that time I now I could ride bikes.

✓ But because of that I can now ride a bike.

The original has redundant words and mixed tenses: 'that time I now I could' is ungrammatical. Replace 'could' with 'can' to express present ability resulting from past practice, and 'a bike' is more natural. Also remove the extra 'I' and 'time' for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'can' for present ability and keep sentence concise.

× So I think I think to my parents.

✓ So I think I should thank my parents.

The phrase 'think to my parents' is incorrect. English uses verbs like 'thank' with a direct object: 'thank my parents.' Also 'I think I think' is repetitive; simplify to 'I think I should thank my parents' to express intention or gratitude. Suggestion: Use 'thank' to express gratitude and avoid repetition.

× I think bicycle is very popular in my country as the school I go right now, so many students came to my came to school with their bicycle.

✓ I think bicycles are very popular in my country. At the school I go to now, so many students come to school with their bicycles.

Multiple issues: 'bicycle' should be plural 'bicycles' when speaking generally (quantifier/number). 'The school I go right now' needs reordering to 'the school I go to now.' 'Came to my came to school' is repetition and wrong tense; use present simple 'come' for habitual actions. Also 'their bicycle' should be plural 'their bicycles' to match students. Suggestion: Use plural nouns for general statements, correct word order for relative clauses, and present simple for habitual actions.

× And I see a lot of people riding bicycle, umm, from time time, time to time.

✓ And I see a lot of people riding bicycles from time to time.

'Riding bicycle' needs plural 'bicycles' or an article 'a bicycle'; plural fits general observation. 'From time time, time to time' is a repetition and should be 'from time to time.' Use present simple 'see' for habitual observation. Suggestion: Use correct idiom 'from time to time' and pluralize 'bicycles' for general statements.

× So I think it's very popular in my country.

✓ So I think it's very popular in my country.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses present simple appropriately to express opinion and needs no change. Suggestion: None.