Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Expand your answer with a clear topic sentence and at least one brief supporting detail. Say why you didn’t have a bike or mention an alternative and use a linking phrase to connect ideas. Keep it natural and no more than 3–4 short sentences.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school or took the bus because my family lived far from school. Also, my parents preferred to buy practical items rather than toys, so a bike wasn’t a priority.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details and link them coherently. Correct minor errors and avoid redundancy. Mention reasons or examples to strengthen your answer and use linking words like “for example” or “because.”

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, I often see many bicycles parked outside banks, malls, and public transport stations, especially during rush hour. This is mainly because bikes are an affordable and convenient way to travel short distances in crowded cities.

× Yes, a lot. Wherever I go I see by and there is so much bikes parked in the parking area, near the banks, near the malls etcetera.

✓ Yes, a lot. Wherever I go I see bikes, and there are so many bikes parked in parking areas, near banks, near malls, etc.

The sentence has multiple grammar issues: 'so much bikes' is incorrect because 'much' is used with uncountable nouns; 'bikes' is countable, so 'many' should be used (Grammar Problem Type 1). Also 'there is so much bikes' has subject-verb agreement error (should be 'there are' for plural), which falls under subject-verb agreement (Grammar Problem Type 27) but is corrected here together. The phrase 'in the parking area' suggests a single place; plural 'parking areas' or omit article 'the' to match general statement. Remove the stray word 'by' which appears to be a typo. Suggested improvements: use 'many' with countable plurals, use 'there are' with plural subjects, and keep noun phrases consistent when making a general statement (no 'the' unless specific).