Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Expand your answer with a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and add specific information (e.g., what kind of bike, who gave it to you, or a memory). Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences).

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I rode it around the neighborhood every weekend. Because I practiced a lot, I learned to ride without the training wheels within a month, which made me very proud.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence and then support it with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words (for example, because, so, therefore) and correct grammar (plural/singular and word order). Be specific about where or why bikes are popular (commuting, recreation, bike-sharing schemes).

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for commuting and short trips. For example, major cities have bike-sharing programs and dedicated lanes, so many commuters choose bicycles to avoid traffic and save money.

× Yes, it's popular and a lot of cities selling those bicycles in our country.

✓ Yes, they're popular and many cities sell those bicycles in our country.

The original sentence has two issues covered by the 'Third person singular issue' category: subject-verb agreement and incorrect verb form. 'It’s popular' uses singular 'it' but refers to 'bikes' (plural), so use 'they're popular.' The phrase 'a lot of cities selling' lacks a finite verb; the correct finite verb for plural subject 'cities' is 'sell.' Also 'a lot of' is acceptable but 'many' is more natural before 'cities.' Suggestion: match subject number with verb (plural subject -> plural verb), and use a finite verb for the second clause: 'many cities sell.'