Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Votre réponse est correcte mais trop brève et manque de détails. Donnez une phrase sujet claire puis développez avec 1–2 détails précis (par exemple, à quel âge, quel type de vélo, où vous l’utilisiez). Utilisez des mots de liaison simples si vous ajoutez une raison ou une anecdote.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was eight and it was a small red bicycle with training wheels. I used it to ride around my neighborhood every afternoon, which helped me learn to balance and made me more independent.

提案: La réponse contient des erreurs grammaticales, des formulations maladroites et manque de clarté. Réorganisez la phrase principale, utilisez des structures correctes (par exemple «I wouldn't say they are very popular, but…») et fournissez des détails concrets. Évitez les doubles négations et corrigez l’accord sujet-verbe. Employez un ou deux connecteurs (however, because, for example).

例: I wouldn't say bikes are very popular overall, but many people do use them for daily short trips. For example, commuters and students often cycle to work or school because bikes are cheap, environmentally friendly and convenient in busy areas.

× Yes, I had.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' uses the auxiliary 'did' for past simple; a short affirmative answer should echo the auxiliary and use the base verb or use 'Yes, I did.' Saying 'Yes, I had.' is not idiomatic here. Use 'Yes, I did.' or 'Yes, I had one.' to be clear.

× I wouldn't say that, however there are a lot of people who uses bike in daily life to transport from a place to another one due to its the fact that it doesn't consume neither energy or.

✓ I wouldn't say that; however, there are a lot of people who use bikes in daily life to travel from one place to another because they do not consume energy.

Multiple errors: 'who uses' is subject-verb agreement incorrect — 'people' requires 'use' (plural). 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' when speaking generally. 'to transport from a place to another one' is awkward; use 'to travel from one place to another.' 'due to its the fact that' is ungrammatical; use 'because' or 'due to the fact that.' 'doesn't consume neither energy or' mixes negatives and conjunctions incorrectly; use 'do not consume energy' or 'neither...nor.' Also 'people' plural requires 'they' and 'do not' not 'doesn't.' The corrected sentence addresses these issues and fits the context.