Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınız doğal ve samimi; ancak son cümleniz tamamlanmamış ve küçük tekrarlar var ("to to"). Ayrıca bağlaç kullanımıyla açıklamaları daha akıcı yapabilirsiniz. Net bir konu cümlesiyle başlayıp, ikinci cümlede pratik yapma sürecinizden kısa bir sonuç çıkarabilirsiniz. Örneğin: başlangıçta bisikletin özelliklerini söyleyin, sonra nasıl öğrendiğinizi ve nihai sonuca değinin. Dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltip cümleleri 2–3 cümlede tutun.

例: Yes, I had a small red bike with training wheels that my uncle gave me when I was seven. I practised every weekend in the park near my house because I wanted to learn to ride on my own, and finally, after several weeks, I could ride without the training wheels.

提案: Cevabınız açık ve mantıklı; sebepleri ve bir eğilimi belirterek desteklemişsiniz. Geliştirmek için daha çeşitli bağlaçlar ve daha spesifik örnekler ekleyin (örneğin hangi şehirler veya hangi tür yollar). Ayrıca gereksiz tekrarları azaltın ("limited cycling infrastructure" ve "basically no bike lanes" benzer fikirler). Cümleleri 3–4 cümle arasında tutup, bir karşılaştırma veya kısa istatistik verme ile güçlendirebilirsiniz.

例: Not really; in most cities there is limited cycling infrastructure, so riding can feel unsafe and inconvenient during rush hour. For example, there are few dedicated bike lanes in downtown areas and drivers often don’t give cyclists enough space. As a result, many commuters choose cars or motorbikes, although cycling is slowly becoming more popular in some neighbourhoods.

× I was thrilled because I had always wanted to ride by myself, so I practiced every weekend in the park near my house until I could ride without the training wheel.

✓ I was thrilled because I had always wanted to ride by myself, so I practiced every weekend in the park near my house until I could ride without the training wheels.

The plural form 'training wheels' is standard when referring to the small auxiliary wheels on a child's bicycle. Use plural to match the reality that there are typically two small wheels; this is a singular/plural issue although it appears in a verb+ -ing context in the list. Change 'training wheel' to 'training wheels' for correct noun number agreement.'

× My father would hold me to to sit at 1st and.

✓ My father would hold me to help me sit on the bike at first and...

The original sentence is ungrammatical and incomplete. 'Would hold me' needs a purpose clause such as 'to help me sit on the bike' and 'at 1st and' is unclear; replace with 'at first' and if trailing thought remains use 'and...' to indicate continuation. This fixes sentence structure and clarifies meaning.'

× Not really. In most cities there is limited cycling infrastructure, so basically no bike lanes and riding often feels unsafe and inconvenient, especially during the rush hour.

✓ Not really. In most cities there is limited cycling infrastructure, so there are basically no bike lanes and riding often feels unsafe and inconvenient, especially during rush hour.

After 'so' the subject refers to 'bike lanes' (plural), so use 'there are' not 'no' alone; include 'there are basically no bike lanes' for grammatical completeness. Also 'during the rush hour' is better as 'during rush hour' in general statements. This corrects the 'there be' construction and article usage.'

× Bicycles are also relatively expensive here, so many commuters prefer cars or motorbikes.

✓ Bicycles are also relatively expensive here, so many commuters prefer cars or motorbikes.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no article change needed. Included for completeness: 'Bicycles' as a general plural is correct to express the class. No modification required.'