Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Sua resposta foi correta e natural, mas muito curta. Para melhorar, desenvolva a resposta com uma frase tópica seguida de um ou dois detalhes específicos (por exemplo, que tipo de bicicleta era, onde você andava, ou com quem). Use conectores simples para tornar a resposta mais fluida. Mantenha no máximo 5 frases e evite repetir palavras ou hesitações.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that I often rode around my neighborhood with my friends. We used to meet at the park every afternoon, and I remember practicing how to ride without training wheels. It was a fun part of my childhood.

提案: A resposta contém boa ideia, mas tem erros gramaticais, repetições e falta de clareza. Para melhorar, comece com uma frase tópica clara, use vocabulário apropriado (por exemplo, "popular among"), corrija estrutura negativa ("not very popular among adults") e explique o motivo com detalhes específicos (por exemplo, infraestrutura ou segurança). Evite repetições e hesitações; organize as informações com um conector como "because" ou "however". Limite-se a até 5 frases.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular among children and teenagers in my country. However, they are less common among adults because many cities lack safe bike lanes. As a result, people often prefer cars or public transport for commuting. Improving infrastructure would likely encourage more adults to cycle.

× Oh yes, it's very popular with kids and teenagers, but I think it's not a so many pop popular with the adults because the we have problems with with instructor in Brazil and the.

✓ Oh yes, they're very popular with kids and teenagers, but I think they're not so popular with adults because we have problems with infrastructure in Brazil.

Multiple issues: 1) Pronoun/reference: 'it' refers to 'bikes' (plural) so use 'they' (subject pronoun) and 'they're' for 'they are'. 2) Word order/extra words: 'a so many pop popular' is confused and redundant; correct phrase is 'not so popular' (use 'not' + adjective with 'so' for degree). 3) Article use: 'the adults' is unnecessary; 'adults' without article is natural when speaking generally. 4) Repeated word 'with with' is a typing error. 5) Wrong noun 'instructor' seems intended to be 'infrastructure' (context: problems making adults less likely to cycle). For improvement: match pronoun number to noun (plural bikes → they), avoid redundant quantifiers ('a so many'), use correct noun choice, and omit unnecessary definite article for general groups. Use clear short clauses: 'they're very popular... but they're not so popular with adults because we have problems with infrastructure in Brazil.'