Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer repeats the examiner's question and contains grammatical errors and hesitation. For Part 1 you should respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then briefly add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep answers natural, concise (no more than 5 sentences), and avoid echoing the question. Fix tense agreement (use simple past) and remove repetition.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it to school and around my neighborhood almost every day, which helped me become more independent. Because the roads near my home were quiet, I felt safe practicing new skills like turning and braking.

提案: Your answer repeats the examiner and includes repetition. Instead, give a direct opinion sentence, then support it with specific reasons and linking words (for example, 'because' or 'however'). Use vocabulary related to popularity (common, widely used, commuting) and be concise.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For instance, cities with dedicated bike lanes see a lot of cyclists during rush hour, although usage is lower in rural areas where distances are larger.

× Did you have a bike when you're when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student repeated words and mixed present contraction 'you're' with past reference, causing a sentence structure error. Remove the unnecessary 'you're when' and keep the past tense clause 'when you were a child' to match the question's past-time frame. Suggestion: say 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' without extra words.

× Do you think bikes bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student repeated the noun 'bikes', creating a redundancy and sentence structure error. Remove the duplicated word so the sentence reads smoothly. Suggestion: speak carefully and avoid repeating words; 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' is correct.