Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời cần đúng thì, rõ ràng hơn và có cấu trúc: mở đầu trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó thêm 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ. Sử dụng thì quá khứ cho hành động trong quá khứ, sửa ngữ pháp (I bought → I had/ My parents bought me), và dùng liên từ để nối ý. Tránh câu quá dài không chính xác ngữ pháp.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I used to ride it every afternoon in the park. It helped me feel independent and I often met friends there, so I learned to ride confidently.

提案: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và chọn từ phù hợp: dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng (Yes/No + lý do), dùng từ đúng (popular, help protect the environment), và cung cấp một ví dụ hoặc so sánh ngắn. Dùng liên từ (because, although, for example) để làm rõ lý do. Tránh lỗi từ (by → be/ are) và số nhiều/đại từ phù hợp.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and help protect the environment. For example, many people cycle to work in cities to avoid traffic and save money on fuel.

× I bought a bike when I'm child because it helped me riding around the park.

✓ I bought a bike when I was a child because it helped me ride around the park.

The sentence mixes past and incorrect present tense: 'I'm child' should be past 'I was a child' (past tense for a past time). Also 'helped me riding' is incorrect because after 'helped' the verb should be in the base form 'ride' (help + object + bare infinitive). Suggestion: use consistent past tense for events that happened in childhood and use 'helped me' + base verb.'

× I think by popular in my country because they have protected environment and save money.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because they protect the environment and save money.

Several issues: 'by popular' is incorrect preposition and structure; the correct expression is 'bikes are popular' (use 'be' verb). 'they have protected environment' is awkward: use active verb 'protect the environment' or 'have a protected environment' depending on meaning. 'save money' is fine but ensure subject agreement: 'bikes ... save money' or 'they save money'. Suggestion: use 'are popular' for prevalence and 'protect the environment' to express environmental benefits.'