Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: ตอบประโยคเริ่มต้นให้ชัดเจนและถูกต้องทางไวยากรณ์ ใช้ประโยคหัวข้อแล้วตามด้วยรายละเอียดเพิ่มเติมอย่างเป็นระบบ ใช้คำเชื่อมเมื่อต้องขยายความ เช่น 'when' หรือ 'so' และลดความซ้ำซ้อน ตัวอย่างเช่น แสดงเวลาอย่างชัดเจน (e.g., 'when I was a child') และบอกกิจกรรมหรือผลลัพธ์เพิ่มเติมอย่างเจาะจง (เช่น ใครสอน ฝึกนานแค่ไหน หรือรู้สึกอย่างไร)

例: Yes, I did. When I was a child I had a small pink bicycle that I learned to ride on my own. I practiced every afternoon for about a month, and by the end I felt confident enough to ride around my neighborhood.

提案: เริ่มด้วยประโยคหัวข้อที่ชัดเจนแล้วตามด้วยเหตุผลที่เฉพาะเจาะจง ใช้คำเชื่อมเช่น 'because', 'however' และหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้ 'I think' ซ้ำหลายครั้ง เพิ่มข้อมูลสนับสนุน เช่น สภาพการจราจร โครงสร้างพื้นฐาน หรือแนวโน้มในเมืองและต่างจังหวัด เพื่อเพิ่มความเฉพาะเจาะจงและความน่าเชื่อถือ

例: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country, especially in big cities like Bangkok, because traffic is heavy and there are few safe bike lanes. As a result, most people prefer cars or motorbikes for convenience and speed. However, cycling is more common in rural areas where roads are quieter.

× Yes, I had when I was young.

✓ Yes, I did when I was young.

The verb 'have' here is used as an auxiliary for possession in the question 'Did you have a bike...?', so the correct short answer uses the auxiliary 'did' rather than 'had'. Use 'did' to form past tense short answers: 'Yes, I did.' Suggestion: answer short questions about past possession with 'did' + subject when the question uses 'did'.

× I have a pink bicycle and I remember I practiced by myself.

✓ I had a pink bicycle and I remember I practiced by myself.

The context is past (childhood). The first clause uses present tense 'have' but should be past 'had' to match 'when I was young' and 'remember I practiced'. Maintain consistent past tense for past events. Suggestion: use past tense verbs for actions or states in the past: 'I had a pink bicycle.'

× I think the most people usually prefer cars and motorbikes rather than bicycle.

✓ I think most people usually prefer cars and motorbikes rather than bicycles.

'The most people' is incorrect; use 'most people' (no 'the'). Also 'bicycle' should be plural to match 'cars and motorbikes'. Quantifier 'most' before plural countable noun requires plural noun. Suggestion: use 'most people' and plural 'bicycles' when comparing with other vehicle types.

× No, I don't think because I live near Bangkok and I think the most people usually prefer cars and motorbikes rather than bicycle.

✓ No, I don't think so because I live near Bangkok and I think most people usually prefer cars and motorbikes rather than bicycles.

After 'I don't think' when giving a reason, English normally uses 'I don't think so' to mean 'I don't agree' or you can follow with a clause. Also 'because' needs the clause to follow; inserting 'so' makes the sentence natural. Suggestion: say 'No, I don't think so because...' or 'No, I don't think that they are popular because...'.

× It's about traffic.

✓ It's because of the traffic.

'It's about traffic' is understandable but not natural. To explain cause, use 'It's because of the traffic' or 'Because of the traffic'. Suggestion: use 'because of' plus noun to explain reason: 'It's because of the traffic.'