Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Старайтесь отвечать более уверенно и ясно: используйте связное вступительное предложение, исправляйте неправильные слова и давайте точные детали. Избегайте заполнителей (например, "uh") и ошибок в словах (например, "write" вместо "ride", "70th birthday"—скорее всего ошибка по числу). Также следите за порядком слов и формой прошедшего времени. Дайте одно ясное предложение, затем одно-два поддерживающих предложения с конкретными деталями и временными маркерами.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a large black bicycle that my parents bought for my seventh birthday. I used to ride it in the local park almost every weekend, and I remember practicing turns and going fast with my friends.

提案: Говорите полными и грамматически корректными предложениями; используйте связки и конкретные примеры. Избегайте неграмотных фраз (например, "they use bicycle older") и говорите о причинах популярности, когда даёте мнение. Добавьте связующее слово (e.g., "because"), конкретные группы людей и примеры ситуаций, чтобы ответ звучал логично и содержательно.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, you can see both elderly people cycling in parks and children riding small bikes near their homes, and bike-sharing schemes are growing in many cities.

× Uh, I had a bike when, uh, I was a child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence contains extra filler words and commas that interrupt the flow. Remove unnecessary fillers and punctuation to make the past-tense statement clear and concise. Suggestion: speak without filler words like 'uh' and avoid extra commas so the past-tense verb 'had' directly relates to 'when I was a child.'

× It was a big and black bicycle and that my parents bought me from my 70th birthday and I used to write it at the park every weekend.

✓ It was a big black bicycle that my parents bought for my seventh birthday, and I used to ride it in the park every weekend.

Several issues: 'big and black' should be 'big black' (adjective order and unnecessary 'and'); 'that my parents bought me from my 70th birthday' is incorrect preposition and number: use 'bought for my seventh birthday'; 'write' is the wrong verb form and word, the correct verb is 'ride'; 'at the park' is better expressed as 'in the park'. Provide clear suggestion: use correct adjective order, correct preposition 'for' with 'birthday', correct number 'seventh' instead of '70th' given context, and correct verb 'ride.'

× Yes, I think, uh, now, uh, they use bicycle older and small and child bicycle, this popular thing.

✓ Yes, I think bicycles are popular now; people use bicycles of different sizes, such as ones for adults and for children.

Multiple tense and structure problems: 'they use bicycle older and small and child bicycle' is ungrammatical. Use plural 'bicycles' and present simple passive or active structure: 'bicycles are popular' or 'people use bicycles.' 'Older and small' is incorrect adjective choice and order; use 'for adults' and 'for children' or 'of different sizes.' 'This popular thing' is awkward; better: 'bicycles are popular.' Suggestion: simplify to present simple, use plural nouns, correct adjective phrases and clearer phrasing.