Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response repeats the examiner's question instead of answering it. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no), then add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Keep it natural and no more than five sentences.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. In fact, I got it for my eighth birthday, and I used it to ride to school and to visit my friends. Because the roads near my house were quiet, I rode it almost every day during the summer.

提案: Your response repeats the examiner's question and contains a mistake. Instead, give a direct opinion (yes/no) or a qualified opinion, then support it with a reason and a brief example. Use a linking word like 'because' or 'however' to connect ideas and stay within five sentences.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities there are dedicated bike lanes and shared bicycle schemes that many commuters use every day.

× Do you think by are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student wrote 'by' instead of the correct noun 'bikes'. This is a spelling/word choice error causing the sentence to lack a proper subject noun. The sentence otherwise uses correct present simple tense for general opinion. Suggestion: replace the incorrect word with the intended plural noun 'bikes' and proofread for typos; read the sentence aloud to catch missing or incorrect words. Grammar problem type's ID:12