Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct answer in the past tense and add one or two supporting details. Use past-tense verbs and a linking word if you add reasons or comparisons. Keep it natural and within 1–3 sentences. For example, briefly say whether you had one, why or why not, and mention a memory or consequence.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. However, I often borrowed my neighbor’s bike and loved riding with friends after school.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No plus reason), use correct grammar (present simple), avoid repetition, and add one specific example or statistic. Use a linking word such as "because" or "for example" to connect your reason and example. Keep to 2–3 sentences maximum.

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, I see crowded bike lanes every morning, and I also ride a bike to the market most weekends.

× I don't have a bike.

✓ I didn't have a bike.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. 'Don't have' is present tense; change to 'didn't have' to match the past time reference. Suggestion: Use past tense auxiliaries (did/didn't) for questions or statements about past situations.

× I think yes, because so many people using bikes and I think they're enjoying, they're enjoying, they're enjoying.

✓ I think so, because so many people use bikes and I think they enjoy it.

Multiple issues: 'I think yes' is awkward—use 'I think so'. 'People using bikes' lacks correct verb form for habitual/general present; use simple present 'use'. 'They're enjoying' repeated is unnecessary and uses progressive incorrectly for habitual enjoyment; simple present 'they enjoy' is correct. Also add 'it' to refer to cycling. Suggestion: For general facts/habits, use simple present (people use, they enjoy it). Avoid repeated fillers.

× Enjoying to play.

✓ They enjoy riding/playing (on bikes).

'Enjoying to play' is incorrect structure: after 'enjoy' we use a gerund (verb+-ing) not 'to' infinitive. Also sentence fragment lacks subject; context implies 'they'. Suggestion: Use 'They enjoy riding' or 'They enjoy playing on their bikes.' Ensure subject is present and verb uses gerund after 'enjoy'.

× I too ride a bike.

✓ I used to ride a bike, too.

Context asks about childhood; present simple 'I ride a bike' refers to current habit. To indicate past habit, use 'used to'. Also place 'too' after the clause for natural order. Suggestion: Use 'used to' for past habitual actions: 'I used to ride a bike, too.'