Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: The answer is irrelevant and unclear. Give a direct response to the question with a short topic sentence (yes/no + brief detail), then one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I received it as a gift for my eighth birthday, and I used it every day to ride to school and play with friends. Because it was lightweight, I learned to ride quickly and felt very confident.

提案: The student repeated the question instead of answering and also mispronounced words. Respond directly with an opinion sentence, follow with specific reasons or examples, and use linking words to connect points. Speak clearly and use correct words like 'bikes' and 'popular'.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country. For example, many people use them for short trips and commuting because they are cheap and convenient, and recently several cities have built bike lanes to encourage cycling.

× If you have a bag when you wear a tie.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

ID 26: The student's reply does not answer the examiner's past-tense question and is an incorrect conditional fragment. The sentence begins with 'If' making it a conditional clause without a main clause. Also vocabulary is wrong ('bag' and 'tie' irrelevant). Correction uses past simple 'had' to match the examiner's past tense 'Did you have'. Suggestion: Answer past-tense yes/no questions with a past-simple statement (e.g., 'I had a bike when I was a child.') and avoid starting with 'If' unless completing the conditional with a main clause.

× Do you think bite us popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

ID 26: The student's reply is ungrammatical and contains misrecognized words ('bite us' instead of 'bikes are'). The correct question uses subject 'bikes' and the verb 'are' to form a present simple question about general popularity. Suggestion: Use 'Do you think' + clause with correct subject and verb, and use present simple 'are' for general truths (e.g., 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?').