Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a fuller, natural response: start with a direct answer, then add one or two brief supporting details (reason, memory, or consequence). Use linking words like 'because' or 'but' and keep it under five sentences.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family lived in a small apartment and we couldn’t store one. However, I often borrowed bikes from neighbors to ride in the park on weekends.

提案: Complete the sentence with specific reasons and at least one supporting detail. Use linking words (for example, because, so, therefore) and give a concrete example or contrast. Keep the answer natural and concise (1–4 sentences).

例: Yes, bikes are popular in our country because many people use them to commute short distances and avoid traffic. For example, in cities you can see bike lanes and shared-bike schemes that make cycling convenient and affordable.

× Yes, bikes are popular in our country because.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country.

The original sentence ends with 'because' without completing the dependent clause, which creates a sentence structure error (incomplete clause). According to the Grammar_Problem_Type_List this is a sentence structure error (ID 26). To fix it, remove the trailing 'because' or complete the clause with a reason, for example: 'Yes, bikes are popular in our country because many people find them affordable and convenient.' If you keep the shorter response, simply say 'Yes, bikes are popular in our country.'