Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be careful with grammar and phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using correct verb forms and linking words. For example, use past tense consistently (“I always dreamed”) and avoid unnecessary words. Keep it natural and within 2–4 sentences.

例: No, I didn’t. I always dreamed of having a bike when I was young because my friends would ride around the neighborhood. However, my family couldn’t afford one at the time, so I only rode bikes at relatives’ houses occasionally.

提案: Avoid fillers like “uh” and give a more specific, linked response. Begin with a clear opinion, then explain why with specific reasons and a brief example. Use linking words such as “however” or “because” to make your answer coherent.

例: I think bikes used to be more popular in the past, but not so much now. For example, more people prefer cars and motorcycles because they are faster and more convenient for long commutes. However, cycling is gaining interest in cities for health and environmental reasons, especially among young people.

× No, I didn't, even though I've always dreaming to have one.

✓ No, I didn't, even though I've always dreamed of having one.

The original sentence uses 'I've always dreaming' which incorrectly combines present perfect auxiliary 'have' with a present participle without the past participle; this is a Verb + -ing form error and also involves the past participle form and preposition choice. Use the present perfect with the past participle 'dreamed' (or 'dreamt') and the correct verb pattern 'dream of + -ing'. Change 'to have one' to 'having one' because 'dream of' is followed by a gerund. Suggest practicing present perfect structures (have + past participle) and verb patterns after verbs of desire (dream of + -ing).

× Uh, it was popular back then, but now I don't think so.

✓ Uh, they were popular back then, but now I don't think so.

The original sentence uses 'it was popular' which mismatches number: 'bikes' is plural, so the pronoun referring to them should be plural. This is a Present tense/number reference issue (subject-pronoun agreement related to tense). Replace 'it' with 'they' and use past tense 'were' to match 'back then'. Ensure the pronoun agrees in number with the noun it refers to; practice replacing nouns with appropriate singular or plural pronouns and checking verb forms for past reference.