Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammar (use past tense), be more natural and less blunt. Start with a clear topic sentence, then briefly add a reason or short detail using linking words. Avoid insensitive phrasing like "my family is poor"—use "we couldn't afford one" or "we didn’t have enough money".

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. We couldn’t afford one at the time, so I usually walked to school or took public transport.

提案: Make the response more natural and specific. Use full sentences, appropriate linking words, and provide a concrete reason or example (e.g., bike-sharing schemes, commuting, leisure). Avoid vague words like "famous."

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, mainly because of the extensive bike-sharing schemes in cities. As a result, many people use bicycles for short commutes and running errands, especially during rush hour.

× No, I haven't a bike because my family is poor.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike because my family was poor.

The question asks about possession in the past ('Did you have... when you were a child?') so use past simple, not present perfect. 'I haven't a bike' is ungrammatical in standard English; use 'I didn't have a bike'. Also keep tense consistency by using 'was' for 'my family was poor.' Use past simple for completed past situations.

× Yeah, I think bikes are popular in my country because of public share. Bike is famous.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because of public bike-sharing. Bikes are well known.

'Public share' is not a correct noun phrase; use 'public bike-sharing' or 'public bike-sharing schemes'. Also use plural 'bikes are' rather than singular 'Bike is famous' when referring generally. 'Yeah' is informal; use 'Yes' in a test. Maintain subject-verb agreement: 'Bikes are well known' or 'Bicycles are popular.'