Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更自然、語法正確並避免冗長。可以用一到兩句直接回答，之後用一至兩句補充具體細節（例如年齡、學會騎車的情況或和誰一起騎），並使用正確時態與片語（例如“interested in riding”）。

例: Yes, I did. My father bought me a small red bike when I was six, and I learned to ride it in our neighborhood park. I used to practice every afternoon with my older brother until I could ride without training wheels.

提案: 注意發音與單詞正確（例如bike而非bank），句子要連貫並使用連接詞。先給出一個清晰的總結句，然後用具體例子（上學、買菜、上班）和理由（便宜、方便、環保）支持。避免片段句與語法錯誤。

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in China. Many people use bicycles for short trips, such as going to school or commuting to nearby shops, because they are cheap, convenient and environmentally friendly. In many cities you can also find shared bikes, which makes cycling even more accessible.

× I remember my father bought a bike for me and I was interested in ride a bike when I was a child.

✓ I remember my father bought a bike for me and I was interested in riding a bike when I was a child.

错误类型：动词 + -ing 形式。句中短语“interested in”后必须接动名词（-ing 形式），而不是动词原形“ride”。建议：记住某些介词或形容词（如 interested in, good at, look forward to）之后应使用动名词，例如：“interested in riding”。

× Yes, I think banks are really popular in China. Lots of people choose bicycle for short trip like going to school or. Other place and it is cheap and easy.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are really popular in China. Lots of people choose bicycles for short trips like going to school or other places because they are cheap and convenient.

错误类型涉及用词和句子结构（请参照第26项和第1项相关问题）。原句中“banks” 是拼写错误，应为“bikes”；“choose bicycle” 数量与可数名词不一致，应为“choose bicycles”或“choose a bicycle”；“short trip” 需复数“short trips”；“going to school or. Other place” 句子断裂且复数形式和连词使用不当；“it is cheap and easy” 指代不明确且形容词用词不精确，使用复数主语时动词和代词也应匹配。建议：检查单复数一致性，修正拼写，并将句子合并为完整句，使用复数名词和合适的形容词（cheap, convenient）。