Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn đã hiểu sai câu hỏi và trả lời bằng cách lặp lại sai từ. Hãy chú ý nghe kĩ và trả lời trực tiếp: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó (nếu cần) thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết. Tránh lặp từ không cần thiết và kiểm soát phát âm để phân biệt từ (ví dụ 'child' và 'Jew').

例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was a small red bike with training wheels, and I used to ride it every afternoon in the park. I remember feeling very proud when I learned to ride without help.

提案: Bạn đã lặp lại và thay đổi từ trong câu hỏi thay vì trả lời. Cần trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng; nếu muốn mở rộng, dùng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'for example' để giải thích lí do. Giữ câu trả lời ngắn gọn (1 chủ đề + 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể).

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, students often cycle to school and in some cities there are dedicated bike lanes which make cycling safer.

× Did you have a bike when you were a Jew?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used the word 'Jew' which is a noun referring to a person's religion or ethnicity and does not make sense in the context of age. The intended meaning is 'child'. Replace the incorrect word with the appropriate noun. Suggestion: use context-appropriate vocabulary and read the question carefully before answering. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Do you think by a popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student misspelled 'bikes' as 'by' and inserted an extra indefinite article 'a' and wrong word order. The original question asks about the popularity of bikes, so the correct structure is 'Do you think [subject] are popular in your country?' Ensure subject noun is correct ('bikes'), check number agreement with the verb ('are'), and remove the unnecessary article. Suggestion: identify the subject and ensure correct word order 'Do you think + subject + be + adjective + in + place?' Grammar problem type ID: 26