Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response repeats the examiner's question instead of answering. For Part 1 you should give a direct short personal answer (topic sentence), then 1–2 supporting details. Keep it natural and concise, use correct grammar (e.g. 'when I was a child'). Try: 2–4 short sentences, with a linking word if you add a reason or example.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven, and I learned to ride it in my neighborhood park. Because I practiced every day with my older cousin, I became quite confident riding on busy paths.

提案: Again, you repeated the question instead of answering. Give a clear opinion first, then add one or two specific reasons or examples using a linking word (e.g. 'because' or 'for example'). Stay within 3–4 sentences and use appropriate vocabulary like 'popular', 'commute', 'cycling infrastructure'.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them to commute short distances. For example, in cities there are dedicated bike lanes and affordable bike-sharing schemes, which encourage people to choose cycling over driving.

× Did you have a bike when you were child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The noun 'child' requires the article 'a' in this context because it refers to a singular countable noun. The correct phrase is 'a child'. Suggestion: include the indefinite article 'a' before singular countable nouns when speaking generally ('when you were a child').

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

This sentence is grammatically correct and matches the present simple question form. No changes are needed. Suggestion: none.