Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is too short and uses the wrong tense. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid simple yes/no replies and keep within 3–5 sentences.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about eight years old, and I learned to ride it in my neighborhood park. Because my parents encouraged outdoor play, I rode it almost every day during the summer and became quite confident riding on busy paths.

提案: The reply is informal and contains a nonstandard fragment (“ex”). Give a direct topic sentence, then support it with specific reasons and a linking word or two. Use full sentences and relevant vocabulary (e.g., commuting, recreation, infrastructure).

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially during the warmer months. For example, many people use bicycles for short commutes and leisure rides because cities have dedicated bike lanes, and the weather in summer makes cycling pleasant.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked a past-time question ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?') so the student should use the past tense. Using 'have' (present simple) is incorrect for that context. Change to 'did' to match auxiliary past question form, or 'Yes, I did' is the concise correct reply. A full response could be 'Yes, I had a bike.' Both match the past tense. Suggestion: Use past simple ('did' or 'had') when responding to questions about past events.

× Yes, they are very much ex, especially in summer.

✓ Yes, they are very popular, especially in summer.

The student attempted to say bikes are popular but used 'very much ex,' which is not a correct English phrase. The correct adjective is 'popular.' 'Very' modifies an adjective, so 'very popular' is appropriate. Also maintain present simple ('are') since the question asks about general popularity. Suggestion: Use clear adjective phrases like 'very popular' and avoid incorrect fragments such as 'very much ex.'