Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: The answer is grammatically incorrect and unclear. Start with a direct, past-tense topic sentence, use correct verbs and avoid extraneous words. Then add one or two brief supporting details (reason or a memory) using a linking word. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences).

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school or took a bus because my family couldn’t afford one. However, I remember borrowing a neighbour’s bike sometimes, and those rides were fun.

提案: The response answers directly but has grammar and vocabulary issues. Use subject-verb agreement and more precise vocabulary, and expand briefly with a reason or example linked with a connector (for example, because, so, therefore). Keep it natural and within 5 sentences.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to work or run errands in busy city areas, which helps them save time and money.

× No, I don't have 5 when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have one when I was a child.

The question asks about a past situation ('when you were a child'), so the past simple tense should be used. The student used present simple ('don't have') which is inconsistent with the time frame. Also '5' appears to be a typo or incorrect word for 'one' (a bicycle). Use 'didn't have' for past negative and 'one' to refer to a single bike: 'No, I didn't have one when I was a child.'

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country. It makes life convenient and time saver.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country. They make life convenient and save time.

'Bikes' is plural, so the pronoun must be plural ('they') and the verb must agree ('make' not 'makes'). The phrase 'time saver' is a noun; to express the intended meaning use the verb phrase 'save time'. Together: 'They make life convenient and save time.'