Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn đã lặp lại câu hỏi của giám khảo thay vì trả lời. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn rồi thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể. Sử dụng thì quá khứ nếu nói về quá khứ, và tránh lặp lại câu hỏi.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with a basket, and I rode it to school most days. I remember practicing on the quiet streets near my house until I felt confident.

提案: Câu trả lời rõ ràng, đúng thì và có thông tin chi tiết so sánh thời gian. Để cải thiện lên điểm cao hơn, hãy thêm một câu mở rộng ngắn với ví dụ cụ thể hoặc số liệu, sử dụng liên từ để mượt mà hơn (for example, however, moreover), và giữ tổng số câu không quá 5.

例: I think bicycles were more popular about ten years ago, but nowadays most people prefer motorbikes and cars because they are faster and more convenient for city travel. For example, many commuters choose motorbikes to save time during rush hour. However, bicycles remain common in rural areas where traffic is lighter and distances are shorter.

× It was more popular about 10 years ago, but nowadays more people use motorbikes and cars because they are faster and more convenient for city travel.

✓ They were more popular about 10 years ago, but nowadays more people use motorbikes and cars because they are faster and more convenient for city travel.

The original sentence starts with 'It was more popular' which incorrectly uses the singular pronoun 'it' to refer to 'bikes' mentioned in the question. This is a subject reference error leading to tense/pronoun mismatch. Since 'bikes' is plural, use the plural subject 'they' and past tense 'were' to talk about the situation 10 years ago. Suggestion: keep consistent subject reference by matching number (singular/plural) and tense (past for a past time frame).

× Bicycles are still used in rural areas, but overall their popularity has declined.

✓ Bicycles are still used in rural areas, but overall their popularity has declined.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses present passive 'are still used' for current habitual situation and present perfect 'has declined' to describe a change from the past to now. No correction needed.