Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response repeats the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct, natural answer (1 sentence topic + up to 2 supporting sentences). Use correct grammar (e.g., “when I was a child”) and add a brief detail or reason. Keep it concise and avoid redundancy.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle with training wheels that I rode around my neighborhood every weekend, which helped me become more confident and independent.

提案: Again, you echoed the examiner rather than answering. Respond directly, state your opinion, and support it with a specific reason or example. Use linking words (e.g., “because,” “for example,” “however”) to make the answer coherent. Keep to a maximum of 5 sentences.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting in crowded cities; for example, bike-sharing programs have become common in major towns, although cars are still dominant for long journeys.

× Did you have a bike when you were child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The noun 'child' needs the definite article 'a' when used in this time reference 'when you were a child'. This is an article error (Grammar Problem Type ID 22). Use 'a child' to indicate the general period of being a child. Suggestion: include the article 'a' before 'child' in similar phrases (e.g., 'when I was a child').

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

This sentence is grammatically correct and requires no changes. It uses correct subject-verb agreement and appropriate tense. No error from the provided list applies.