Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct, use correct tense and vocabulary, avoid hesitations, and give one or two clear supporting details linked logically. Use simple linking words (for example, "and", "so", "because"). Also correct common errors: say "I had a bike" or "I used to have a bike", "ride" instead of "write", and specify where/with whom you rode and what you enjoyed.

例: Yes, I used to have a bike when I was a child. I often rode it in my garden and around the neighbourhood with my friends, and we liked racing each other because it was fun and kept us active.

提案: Answer directly, give a brief reason and an example or contrast. Use correct modal verbs and word order: say "people tend to prefer cars or motorcycles" rather than "must like use". Add a linking word such as "because" to explain why.

例: Not very popular in the cities. Most people prefer cars or motorcycles because they are faster and more convenient for long distances, although cycling is more common in smaller towns for short trips.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question asks about possession 'when you were a child' (past time). The student uses present tense 'have' but should use past tense 'had' to match the time reference. Suggestion: use past tense when referring to past states or possessions.

× I used to write a bike at, uh, my garden with, uh, my friends and I really like to, to play by.

✓ I used to ride a bike in my garden with my friends and I really liked to play there.

Multiple issues: 'write a bike' is incorrect — the correct verb is 'ride' (present/past base form). The phrase 'used to' requires the base form 'ride'. 'At my garden' is an incorrect preposition; 'in my garden' or 'in the garden' is correct. 'I really like to, to play by' mixes present and past and has wrong word 'by'; because speaker refers to past habits, 'liked to play there' is appropriate. Suggestion: use 'used to + base verb' for past habits, choose correct verb 'ride', use proper preposition 'in', and match tense consistency.

× I don't think so. I think people must like use motor, motorcycle or car to ride around the city.

✓ I don't think so. I think people would rather use motorcycles or cars to get around the city.

Problems: 'must like use' is ungrammatical — combining 'must' and 'like' incorrectly. Native phrasing for preference is 'would rather' or 'prefer to'. 'Motor' alone is unclear; 'motorcycle' plural fits. 'To ride around the city' is awkward for vehicles other than bikes; 'get around the city' is natural. Suggestion: use appropriate modal/phrase to express preference ('would rather' or 'prefer to'), use correct plural nouns, and choose idiomatic verb phrases for travel.