Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but too short, repetitive and has a small grammar issue (‘that bike’ sounds odd without context). Improve by giving a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Avoid repetition (don’t say “of course” and “I had” redundantly).

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I used it to ride to the park every weekend.

提案: Your answer expresses agreement but contains repetition, grammar mistakes and an unclear word choice (‘bag’ seems wrong). Improve by starting with a concise opinion, then add specific supporting details or reasons with linking words and correct plural/singular forms. Keep it to no more than 4–5 sentences.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many children ride bikes to school, and increasingly adults use bicycles for short commutes because they are cheap and help avoid traffic.

× Almost every child has a bag and also the adults nowadays use bike very often.

✓ Almost every child has a bike, and adults nowadays also use bikes very often.

The original sentence has two number errors: 'has a bag' seems incorrect in context—likely 'has a bike' (singular) because 'every child' takes a singular noun with an article; and 'use bike' is missing plural or article. For general statements about adults using bicycles, use the plural 'bikes' or the phrase 'use a bike'. Also word order: move 'also' after 'nowadays' or before 'use' for clarity. Suggestion: use consistent number agreement: 'every child has a bike' and 'adults... use bikes'.

× Oh yes of course bikes are are very popular in my country.

✓ Oh yes, of course, bikes are very popular in my country.

The sentence contains a repeated word 'are are' and lacks commas for natural speech rhythm. Remove the duplicate 'are' to correct the verb phrase. Adding commas after interjections 'Oh yes' and 'of course' improves clarity. No tense change is needed.