Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Habla en primera persona y responde directamente. Usa una oración principal que diga si tenías bicicleta y añade una o dos oraciones breves con detalles específicos (por ejemplo, edad, tipo de bicicleta, recuerdos). Evita repetir la pregunta. Utiliza conectores simples como “cuando” o “porque”.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was six and it was a small red bicycle with training wheels. I remember riding it every afternoon in the park because my parents encouraged me to play outside.

提案: Respóndele al examinador con una opinión clara y apoya tu respuesta con razones concretas y un ejemplo. Usa conectores como “because” o “for example” para enlazar ideas. Mantén la respuesta concisa y evita repetir la pregunta textualmente.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities there are shared bike programs and many students commute to school by bicycle, especially during warm months.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original student response simply repeated the examiner's question, so it is a sentence structure error (ID 26). A proper answer should be a statement that fits the past tense asked by the question. Use the past simple 'had' to show possession in the past and include a subject and verb to form a complete sentence. Suggestion: respond with 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' or 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.' to match the question's tense and provide a complete response.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of giving an answer, which is a sentence structure error (ID 26). The question is in present simple asking for an opinion, so the reply should be a statement using present simple: 'I think' followed by the opinion. Suggestion: start with 'Yes, I think...' or 'No, I don't think...' and provide supporting details if possible, e.g. 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because many people use them for short trips.'