Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够时态一致且缺乏细节。注意时态应与过去经历一致（使用过去式），并提供一至两句具体细节以丰富答案。例如可以说明什么时候有、是谁买的或经常去哪儿骑。回答不应太短或重复。

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven, which my parents bought for me as a birthday present. I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day during summer.

提案: 回答较口语化且语法混乱，表达不够连贯。建议使用更清晰的主题句并用连接词（however, although, because）连接原因和对比，提供具体例子或趋势（如城市与乡村差异、公共自行车系统等）。控制长度在最多五句内。

例: Bicycles are still fairly common in my country, especially in smaller towns and among students. However, in recent years more people have been buying cars because of rising incomes and convenience, so cycling has declined in many cities. That said, some urban areas have introduced public bike-sharing schemes which make cycling popular again for short trips.

× Yeah, I do have one.

✓ Yeah, I did have one.

学生被问及过去是否拥有自行车，时态应为过去式。原句使用一般现在时（do have），与问题的过去时间（"when you were a child"）不一致。建议将动词改为过去式 did have，或更自然地说“I had one.”（我有一辆）。

× Yeah, bikes are pretty popular, you know, country.

✓ Yeah, bikes are pretty popular in my country.

原句缺少介词短语的正确结构，且片段“you know, country”不完整。应使用介词 in 引出地点："in my country"。建议改为完整句子以清晰表达。

× But it was, umm, several times ago 'cause nowadays we are, we more tend to buy cars instead of riding bicycles, I think.

✓ But that changed several years ago, because nowadays we tend to buy cars instead of riding bicycles, I think.

该句有多处问题： 1) 时态和表达不清："it was several times ago" 不合逻辑，应该说"that changed several years ago"或"that was several years ago"来表达变化发生的时间。2) 多余或不规范的插入语："we are, we more tend" 语序错误且不需要重复主语。正确搭配是"we tend to do sth"表示倾向。3) 用词问题："several times ago" 应为 "several years ago"（几年前），或根据具体时间改为合适表达。建议使用过去时描述变化发生的时间，主句用现在时描述当前趋势："That changed several years ago, because nowadays we tend to buy cars instead of riding bicycles."