Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Evita repetir la pregunta del examinador y responde directamente. Empieza con una oración principal que responda (por ejemplo: “Yes, I did” o “No, I didn’t”), luego añade 1–2 oraciones de apoyo con detalles específicos y usa conectores simples si es necesario. Mantén las respuestas naturales y no más de 5 oraciones. Por ejemplo, menciona dónde vivías, qué tipo de bicicleta tenías o por qué no tenías una. También corrige errores léxicos (“cyclobias” no es correcto) y termina con una breve reflexión si procede.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle when I was about eight that I often rode around my neighborhood. Because our street was quiet and safe, my friends and I would race each other on weekends. I remember fixing the chain once with my dad, which made me feel proud.

× Yes, especially in Mexico City where there are more cyclobias and I think it's because the infrastructure is more planned than in other countries and.

✓ Yes, especially in Mexico City, where there are more cyclists, and I think it's because the infrastructure is more planned than in other cities.

The student used the nonstandard word 'cyclobias' which is incorrect; the correct plural noun is 'cyclists' (singular/plural issue). Also 'other countries' is unlikely when comparing within a country; 'other cities' is clearer. Additionally, the sentence ends with a trailing 'and' which makes it incomplete (sentence structure issue). Suggestion: replace 'cyclobias' with 'cyclists', change 'other countries' to 'other cities' for a coherent comparison, remove the trailing 'and', and add a comma after 'Mexico City' for clarity.