Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và lưu loát: tránh lặp từ và sử dụng thì phù hợp (ví dụ: dùng quá khứ khi nói về quá khứ). Thêm một câu chủ đề rõ ràng rồi phát triển bằng một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể. Sử dụng liên từ để mạch lạc hơn và không quá 5 câu.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it to ride to school every day and sometimes I cycled to the market with my mother. It was a small red bicycle with a basket, which made carrying books and snacks very convenient.

提案: Làm rõ chủ ngữ và số nhiều/ít, sửa phát âm từ sai, tránh lặp từ và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rồi thêm lý do hoặc ví dụ, dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "for example" để mạch lạc.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient. For example, many people commute short distances by bicycle to avoid traffic, and children often cycle to school or to the park in the afternoons.

× Yes, I have, I had a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used 'have' incorrectly in response to a past-tense question. Use 'did' as the short answer for past simple questions in English. Suggestion: respond with 'Yes, I did' or simply 'Yes, I had.'

× Uh, I use, I use it to go to school every day and umm.

✓ I used it to go to school every day.

The question asks about a past habit, so the verb should be in past simple. The student repeated 'I use' and used present tense incorrectly. Suggestion: use 'used' for past habits and avoid repetition: 'I used it to go to school every day.'

× Yes, it is very popular in my country.

✓ Yes, they are very popular in my country.

The subject 'bikes' is plural, so the pronoun and verb must be plural: 'they are'. The student used 'it' (singular) incorrectly. Suggestion: match number of pronoun and verb to the noun: 'Bikes are very popular' or 'They are very popular.'

× Uh, a lot of, a lot of people use bike to travel every day, especially, uh, children also have a bite to go to school or go to, uh, go to the park.

✓ A lot of people use bikes to travel every day. Especially, children also have a bike to go to school or to the park.

Several errors: 'a lot of people' is fine but 'use bike' needs plural 'bikes' (countable noun with quantifier) and 'have a bite' is a pronunciation/spelling error; should be 'a bike.' Also maintain parallel infinitive form: 'to go to school or to the park.' Suggestion: use plural after 'use' with plural noun 'bikes' and correct spelling to 'bike', and keep 'to' before both verbs for parallelism.