Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Savolga javob berishda qisqalik va aniqlikni saqlang. Avvalo mavzuni aniq ifoda eting (masalan, “Yes, I did.”), so‘ng qo‘llab‑quvvatlovchi tafsilotlar bering. Tovush takrorlanishlari va grammatik xatolardan qoching (masalan, “I had to” noto‘g‘ri kontekstda ishlatilgan). Gaplaringizni 2–4 ta gap bilan cheklang, bog‘lovchi so‘zlardan (for example, after school, often, usually) foydalaning va aniq misollar keltiring (qayerda, kim bilan, qachon).

例: Yes, I did. When I was a child I often rode my bike around the village with my friends after school. It was one of my favourite hobbies because it gave me freedom and a chance to explore nearby fields and lanes.

提案: Javobni ochiq va tuzilgan qilib bering: boshida qisqacha fikringizni ayting, so‘ng sabablar bilan mustahkamlang va yakuniy fikr bilan tugating. Takrorlarni olib tashlang va aloqador so‘zlarni qo‘llang (for example, because, however, therefore). Konkret misollar yoki taqqoslashlar keltiring (masalan, shahar va qishloq farqi, statistika yoki kundalik odatlar).

例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people prefer cars because they are faster and more comfortable, and cities generally lack safe cycling lanes. As a result, cycling is more common in rural areas or among people who enjoy it as a hobby.

× Yes I had to and when I was younger I used to ride a bike around the village and and it is one of my favorite hobbies and after after school I I travel with.

✓ Yes, I had one. When I was younger, I used to ride a bike around the village, and it was one of my favorite hobbies. After school I used to travel by bike.

Bu jumlada asosan zamon xatosi mavjud: gaplar aralash va noto‘g‘ri zamon shakllari ishlatilgan. Ingliz tilida o'tgan zamon kontekstida (when I was younger) barcha tegishli feʼllar ham o'tgan zamonda bo'lishi kerak. 'I had to' noto'g'ri ishlatilgan — ehtimol 'I had one' yoki 'I had a bike' demoqchi bo'lgansiz. 'It is one of my favorite hobbies' hozirgi zamonda; bu kontekstda o'tgan zamonda 'it was' bo'lishi ma'qul. Shuningdek, takrorlangan so'zlar ('and and', 'after after', 'I I') noto'g'ri. Taklif: aniq va qisqa jumlalarni ishlating, har bir jumlada mos zamonni saqlang, takrorlarni olib tashlang va 'travel with' o'rniga 'travel by bike' yoki 'travel by bicycle' deb yozing.

× Honestly I don't think so because in my country many people prefer to have their own car and and also a lack of bike cycling infrastructure.

✓ Honestly, I don't think so, because in my country many people prefer to have their own cars, and there is also a lack of cycling infrastructure.

Bu jumlada kvantifikator va konstruktsiya xatosi mavjud: 'many people prefer to have their own car' da 'car' ko‘plikda bo‘lishi lozim — 'cars' yoki 'their own car' ni odatda 'their own cars' deb ifodalaymiz. Shuningdek, 'and also a lack of bike cycling infrastructure' noto‘g‘ri grammatika bilan tuzilgan; to‘g‘ri konstruktsiya — 'and there is also a lack of cycling infrastructure' yoki 'and there is a lack of bike lanes'. Taklif: sanoqni moslang (singular/plural), bo‘sh joylarni to‘ldiring ('there is'), va 'bike cycling' dan faqat 'cycling' yoki 'bike' so‘zidan birini foydalaning.