Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Travaillez la clarté et la correction grammaticale; évitez les doubles négations et les répétitions. Répondez d’abord directement, puis ajoutez une ou deux phrases concises pour expliquer pourquoi. Utilisez le passé simple pour parler d’événements passés et des mots de liaison simples (for example, because, so). Exemple concret d’exercice : reformulez la réponse en une phrase principale + une phrase de détail, et corrigez les erreurs (« I didn’t have a bike because I wasn’t interested in cycling »).

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I wasn’t interested in cycling. I preferred reading and playing indoor games, so my parents didn’t buy one for me.

提案: Améliorez la précision et la fluidité: donnez une opinion claire suivie d’au moins une raison spécifique et un exemple. Évitez les répétitions et utilisez des mots de liaison (for example, because, therefore, for instance). Utilisez le présent simple pour les faits généraux et des adjectifs appropriés (popular, convenient, eco-friendly). Par exemple : « Yes, bikes are popular because they are cheap and convenient for short trips » puis ajoutez un exemple concret comme les pistes cyclables ou le trafic dense.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For instance, many people use bicycles to commute to work in the city where traffic is heavy and parking is expensive.

× No, I didn't not buy because I I didn't not like the bike.

✓ No, I didn't buy one because I didn't like bikes.

The student used a double negative ('didn't not') and omitted the object (one/a bike). Use simple past 'didn't buy' and include an object: 'buy one' or 'buy a bike'. Avoid repeating words. Suggestion: say 'I didn't buy one because I didn't like bikes.'

× I am I I didn't not interested.

✓ I wasn't interested.

The sentence mixes present 'I am' with past negative and contains double negatives and repetition. The correct past form is the past tense of 'be' with adjective: 'wasn't interested.' Suggestion: use 'I wasn't interested' to match the past-tense question.

× Yes, because the people live the bike.

✓ Yes, because people like bikes.

The phrase 'the people' and 'live the bike' are incorrect. 'Live' is wrong verb; likely 'like' is intended. Use plural general noun 'people' without 'the' for general statements and plural 'bikes.' Suggestion: say 'people like bikes.'

× They they are, they are fast.

✓ They are fast.

The sentence has unnecessary repetition 'They they are, they are.' Remove duplicate words and punctuation. Keep concise: 'They are fast.' Suggestion: avoid repeating and keep a single clause.