Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Votre réponse est hors sujet et peu claire. Répondez directement à la question avec une phrase thématique, puis ajoutez 1–2 détails précis (par exemple: qui l’a acheté, à quel âge, comment vous l’utilisiez). Utilisez des mots de liaison simples si vous ajoutez des informations (par exemple: "because", "so", "when").

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I used to ride it to school and around the park every weekend.

提案: La réponse est très concise et manque de développement. Donnez une réponse claire puis développez avec des raisons et un exemple concret. Utilisez des connecteurs (par exemple: "because", "for example", "however") pour rendre votre réponse cohérente et naturelle.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short journeys and exercise. For example, in cities there are many bike lanes and people often commute by bike to avoid traffic.

× When you wear a shield.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

The student's reply 'When you wear a shield.' is unrelated and lacks a verb structure appropriate to the examiner's past-tense question. This is a sentence structure error: it does not answer the question and is incomplete. Suggestion: answer in past tense to match 'Did you have...?' Use a subject and past-tense verb (I did / I had) and add a brief clarifying clause if desired (e.g., 'I had a bike when I was a child').

× Yes, I think.

✓ Yes, I think so.

The original 'Yes, I think.' sounds incomplete and unnatural in response to 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' This is a present tense usage/phrase completeness issue: add 'so' to clearly express agreement about a current general belief. Suggestion: Use 'Yes, I think so.' or 'Yes, I do.' to provide a natural, complete present-tense response.