Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn chỉ lặp lại câu hỏi mà không trả lời. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề, sau đó thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: loại xe, tuổi khi có xe, kỷ niệm liên quan). Sử dụng liên từ như "and" hoặc "because" để nối ý và giữ độ dài tối đa 5 câu.

例: Yes, I did. I got a small red bicycle when I was seven, and I used to ride it to my friend's house every afternoon. Because the bike had training wheels at first, I felt confident learning to balance quickly. I still remember racing down the local park path with my brother.

提案: Bạn lại lặp câu hỏi và có lỗi lặp từ. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp với quan điểm, rồi cung cấp lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ về thành phố, mục đích sử dụng như đi lại hoặc thể thao). Dùng liên từ như "because", "for example" để làm rõ và mạch lạc.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities with heavy traffic, because they are cheaper and more convenient for short trips. For example, many students and office workers cycle to avoid congestion, and there are also growing bike-sharing programs in major cities.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

The original student response repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure/response error (not answering the prompt). Suggestion: provide a brief past-tense answer to match the question (use 'did' for yes/no short answer and past simple 'had' for a full sentence). Example: 'Yes, I did.' or 'I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Do you think bikes are popular popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student accidentally repeated the adjective 'popular' twice. This is a lexical/word duplication error classified here as incorrect use of adjectives. Suggestion: remove the duplicated word so the adjective appears once. Also ensure the question uses present simple for general truth (bikes are popular).