Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: The student simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. For improvement, give a direct response (yes/no), then add one or two brief supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 3–4 sentences). For example, say whether you had a bike, mention who gave it or how often you used it, and finish with a short related comment.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was about eight years old. My parents bought it for me as a birthday present, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day. It helped me feel independent and active.

提案: The answer addresses the question and gives a reason, but it needs clearer structure, correct grammar, and more specific details. Improve by starting with a clear topic sentence, using linking words (for example, because, especially, and), correcting grammar (e.g., 'a exercise' → 'exercise'), and adding a concrete example or comparison. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in the Philippines because many people use them for exercise and short trips. For example, younger people often cycle in parks or join group rides, and older people use stationary or foldable bikes for gentle exercise. As a result, cycling is becoming more visible in cities and suburbs.

× Yes, I think it's popular here in the Philippines because nowadays bikes are also used as a exercise, specially in younger and elderly people.

✓ Yes, I think they're popular here in the Philippines because nowadays bikes are also used as exercise, especially by younger and elderly people.

Pronoun and agreement: 'it' refers to a singular noun but 'bikes' is plural, so use 'they're' (they are). Article and noun: 'a exercise' is incorrect because 'exercise' is uncountable here, so remove 'a'. Word choice: 'specially' is less appropriate; use 'especially'. Preposition: use 'by younger and elderly people' to indicate who uses the bikes. Overall suggestion: match pronouns to the noun number, avoid using 'a' with uncountable nouns, use 'especially' for emphasis, and use the preposition 'by' to indicate the agents.