Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your answer grammatically correct, concise, and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one short supporting detail. Use linking words and correct verb forms (e.g., "I didn’t have"). Avoid repeating words. Keep it to 1–3 sentences.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, I got one when I was a teenager and I used it to ride to school and to visit friends.

提案: Organize your response with a clear topic sentence and two specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., "easier than cars") and avoid vague phrases. Add a brief example to make it concrete. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheaper to run and much easier to park in crowded cities. For example, many people commute short distances by bicycle to avoid traffic and save money on fuel.

× I don't have a bike when I was a child, but now I have a bike.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but now I have one.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't have' with past time reference 'when I was a child.' Use simple past 'didn't have' for past situations. Also replace the repeated noun 'a bike' with the pronoun 'one' to avoid redundancy. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense for past situations and use pronouns to avoid repetition.

× I think bikes are very popular in my country because it is easy for travel from one place to another place and especially for parking.

✓ I think bikes are very popular in my country because they make it easy to travel from one place to another and are especially convenient for parking.

Problems: 1) 'it is easy for travel' is awkward and uses wrong structure; use 'make it easy to travel' or 'are easy to travel by.' 2) 'from one place to another place' is redundant; use 'from one place to another.' 3) subject reference 'it' should refer to 'bikes,' so use plural 'they.' Suggestion: Ensure correct subject-pronoun agreement and use idiomatic prepositional phrases like 'travel from one place to another.'

× Bikes are very easy than car.

✓ Bikes are much easier than cars.

Errors: 1) Comparative form requires adjective comparative 'easier' not 'easy.' 2) Use 'than' with the comparative. 3) Nouns should agree in number: compare plural 'bikes' with plural 'cars' or use 'a car.' 4) Use an appropriate adverb 'much' or 'far' to intensify 'easier' rather than 'very.' Suggestion: Use comparative adjective form and match noun numbers when making comparisons.