Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and use a clear topic sentence followed by a brief reason. Avoid filler phrases like “to be honest.” Also check grammar and sentence variety: a single short answer plus one supporting detail is enough.

例: No, I didn't have a bike as a child. I wasn't interested in cycling then because my parents prioritized other activities like piano lessons, so I spent most free time indoors.

提案: Correct subject-verb errors and use a clear topic sentence. Begin with a direct statement (“Yes, bikes are popular”) then add a specific reason or example with a linking word (e.g., “because” or “especially”). Keep it to one or two supporting sentences.

例: Yes, bikes are popular in my country, especially among children and teenagers, because many families encourage cycling for exercise and there are safe bike lanes in most neighborhoods.

× Yes, I do bikes. I are quite popular in my country, especially among children and teenagers.

✓ Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and teenagers.

The original contains an incorrect use of the pronoun and verb: 'I do bikes' is wrong because the speaker is not saying they personally do bikes but stating a general fact about bikes. 'I are quite popular' uses the subject pronoun I with the verb form 'are', which is incorrect. Replace the clause with the correct subject 'bikes' and the correct verb 'are' to form the plural subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: Use the noun 'bikes' as the subject when talking about popularity and match the verb to plural subjects ('bikes are').