Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Correct the tense and make the answer more natural and slightly longer (1–3 sentences). Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one brief supporting detail or reason. Use past tense for childhood and avoid filler words.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family lived in a small apartment and we usually walked or took public transport, so I never got the chance to own one.

提案: Give a direct opinion with reasons and specific examples, using linking words for coherence. Avoid fillers like “uh” and repeating words. Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences: state your view, then explain or give an example.

例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country, mainly because the infrastructure for cycling is limited. For example, there are few safe bike lanes in cities, so most people prefer cars or buses for daily travel.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense ('don't have') with a past time expression ('when I was a child'). Use the past tense 'didn't have' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: use past simple for completed past situations (I didn't have a bike).

× Uh, I would say not too much, but uh, it was OK, OK.

✓ Uh, I would say not very much, but it was okay.

The phrase 'not too much' is informal but acceptable; however 'very' is more natural here. Also use consistent register: replace 'OK, OK' with 'it was okay.' The main issue is informal wording and repetition rather than strict grammar; adjust adverb choice for clarity and use lowercase 'okay' for standard writing. Suggestion: prefer 'not very much' and avoid redundant fillers.