Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Correct the grammar and make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one brief supporting detail. Avoid redundant words. For example, use the correct past simple form (“I did” is not used with another past verb).

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a red mountain bike that I used to ride to school most days, and I remember fixing a flat tire once with my father.

提案: Make the answer more direct and provide a specific reason or example. Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., however, although, because). Keep it within 2–4 sentences and avoid vague phrasing like “at this moment.”

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among adults who use them for commuting. However, recently many children prefer roller skates and scooters because they find them more fashionable and easier to use in crowded parks.

× Yes I did had a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence incorrectly uses the auxiliary did with the past form had. In simple past affirmative sentences we do not use did + past verb; we use the past verb alone. Use 'I had' instead of 'I did had'. Also add a comma after Yes for natural punctuation.

× Yes, I would say that bikes are popular in my country, but at this moment kids usually wear skates instead of using bikes.

✓ Yes, I would say that bikes are popular in my country, but at the moment kids usually wear skates instead of using bikes.

The phrase 'at this moment' is grammatically correct but in this general habitual context 'at the moment' is the natural expression for current trends. The rest of the sentence is correct in present simple for a habitual action ('kids usually wear'). Change 'at this moment' to 'at the moment' for idiomatic usage.