Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You repeated the examiner's question instead of giving an answer. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no or short statement) and add one or two brief supporting details using linking words (for example, because/so/and). Keep your response natural and under five sentences.

例: Yes, I had a small red bike when I was about seven. It had training wheels at first, but I learned to ride without them after a few weeks, so I gained a lot of confidence and independence.

提案: Again, you repeated the question instead of answering. To improve, state your opinion directly and back it up with specific reasons or examples using linking words (for instance/for example/therefore). Limit yourself to up to five sentences and use vocabulary relevant to transport and popularity.

例: I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities with dedicated bike lanes. For example, many people use them for short commutes because they are cheap and convenient, and recently the city has added more bike-sharing schemes, so cycling has become more common.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering; this is a sentence structure/pragmatic error rather than a pure grammar form error. Provide a full declarative past-tense answer that matches the question. Use past simple 'had' to state possession in the past and include a subject 'I' and auxiliary is not required for affirmative past simple. Suggestion: respond with 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' or 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.' depending on truth.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student again repeated the examiner's question instead of producing a declarative answer. This is a sentence structure/pragmatic error. To answer the present-tense opinion question, use present simple 'I think' plus the clause 'bikes are popular in my country.' Alternatively, to disagree use 'No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country.' Ensure subject 'I' and correct auxiliary for negative 'do not/don't'.