Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. For Part 1 you should answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details using linking words. Keep answers natural, relevant, and under five sentences. For example, start with “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t,” then explain when or why, using linking words such as “because,” “for example,” or “so.”

例: Yes, I did. I got a small red bike when I was about six, and I used it to ride to my friend’s house every afternoon. Because I practised a lot, I became confident riding on busy streets by the time I was ten.

提案: Your answer addresses the question and gives reasons, but needs clearer structure, more natural phrasing, and varied vocabulary. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g. “Yes, bikes are very popular”), then use linking words (“because,” “for example,” “also”) and give one specific example or comparison. Avoid repetition and minor grammar errors (e.g. “a useful mode,” “especially when you go to the market”). Keep it under five sentences.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are an affordable and practical mode of transport. For example, many people ride to the market or to school since bikes are easy to park and cheap to maintain. Also, in crowded cities they are often faster than cars for short trips.

× Bikes are popular in our country because it's one of the useful mode of transportation.

✓ Bikes are popular in our country because they are one of the useful modes of transportation.

The sentence mixes singular and plural forms and uses a singular quantifier with a plural subject. 'Bikes' is plural, so refer to them with 'they' (pronoun agreement). 'One of the ... modes' requires the plural noun 'modes' after 'one of'. Also 'useful mode' should be plural to match 'one of the ...'. Replace 'it's' with 'they are' for correct pronoun and verb agreement.

× It's also convenient and easy to bring with you, especially when you go to market, go to school or any establishment nearby.

✓ They are also convenient and easy to bring with you, especially when you go to the market, go to school, or visit any nearby establishment.

Pronoun agreement: 'It' should match the plural subject 'bikes' so use 'They are'. Prepositions and articles: English typically uses 'go to the market' with the definite article. 'Any establishment nearby' is clearer as 'any nearby establishment'. Also added 'visit' for natural collocation with 'establishment'. Commas added for clarity.

× Bicycle is useful for everyday usage in our country.

✓ Bicycles are useful for everyday use in our country.

The noun should be plural to talk generally about bicycles: use 'Bicycles' not 'Bicycle'. 'Everyday usage' is awkward; 'everyday use' is the natural collocation. Also adjust verb to plural 'are' to match subject-verb agreement.