Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较直接但表达有些重复和语法问题。注意时态一致与句子简洁。可以用一到两句说明情况并补充具体细节（例如骑车上学的频率、感受或骑行距离），并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mum bought it for me and I usually rode it to school every day, which saved me about twenty minutes compared with walking.

提案: 回答缺乏流畅性和准确性，存在主谓一致和用词不当。避免直接说“agree with your opinion”（面试中应直接回答）。提供更具体的原因和例子，并用连接词组织观点（例如：because, moreover, for example）。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many families find them affordable and convenient. For example, children often cycle to school when the distance is short, and in small towns cycling is often faster than taking public transport.

× My mom bought it for me and I usually ride it to school.

✓ My mom bought it for me and I usually rode it to school.

句子中前半部分是过去时（bought），描述过去的事件；后半部分用 usually ride（一般现在时）与上下文时间不一致。因为说话者在讲自己小时候有自行车，后半句也应使用过去时表示习惯性的过去动作，故将 usually ride 改为 usually rode。建议：讲过去发生的习惯用过去时（used to 或过去时的动词）。

× I think bike is popular in my country because the child only have this way to go to school or if they do not have a bike then they could only choose to walk to school.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because children only have this way to go to school; if they do not have a bike, they can only walk to school.

原句存在多处数的一致性错误： 1) 主语 bike 应为复数 bicycles 或 bikes，因为在泛指一种事物在国家范围内是否流行，应使用复数或定冠词加泛指名词，因此改为 bikes。 2) 主语 the child 与动词 have 不一致，应使用复数 children 与复数动词 have。 3) 语句中 also 有语法和逻辑表达问题，合并后使句子更通顺。 此外将 could 改为 can 更符合一般事实陈述（现在时）。建议：泛指时用复数形式，主谓在人称和数上保持一致，描述一般事实用一般现在时。